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last night I dreamed
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last night I dreamed |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
last night I dreamed of airplanes, winged creatures soft kisses and runways in the night. I watched as your plane landed in my...dream...and we took flight together reaching heights never thought possible. your nuzzles on my skin and my soft cries in the dark soon turned to raging exploding engines and falling from the sky. Suddenly we were in the airport your arms reaching round. I was finally home, the circle complete. And then I awoke alone with this incredible missingyoumorethanIcantake feeling… ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sound like you have some lively dreams there. I surely can relate to the missing part...very well done. michael |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
lloveit, Sometimes the nightmare doesn't occur until we awaken.  Nicely done. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There's a lot of that missing schtuff going around. *S* Well done, Lovey! (Are those feathers fluttering about? *G*) |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
awww...this is a touching piece. No more nightmares, eh? ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow my browser must be sleeping too, lol, it still said I had zero replies and I was just going to edit a word before anyone saw lolol, think again lovey *g* thanks michael, and yep, that missing you thing certainly affects my dreams  thanks ohme and RS...and no, no nightmares, just need an airplane ticket to cure these blues suthern, dang if he didn't get away without my grabbing a single feather *g*....but I tried....really hard |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ILoveit....this one brought tears to my eyes. Oh, have I had dreams like this. Thanks for reminding me what's important in life. Hugs Ruth ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
big hugs back ruth, glad you liked it |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I give an A to that sad but beautiful piece ... HUGS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Iloveit, Iloveit, Iloveit, Iloveit. It will pass. Great job. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Beautiful my friend.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Rainbow, JTF, Seymore....thanks |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....and a horrible feeling it is, lovey. All one can do is to keep hopes flying high, even when airplanes don't. I love the poem. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks balladeer, praise coming from you means a lot |
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