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Never Been Kissed
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Never Been Kissed |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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NEVER BEEN KISSED Does she know how bad I've missed her? Does she know how she warms me inside? God, I've never even kissed her, But I know she's meant to be my bride. She dons an angel's essence. With the innocense of a child. The Darkness yields to her presence, Her passion flows like the wind, wild. She dances in my dreams at night, I can hear her voice softly sing. The one thing in this world I know is right, I long to give her everything. She finds a comfort in my poetry. Longs to lay her head upon my chest. I'll never understand just what she sees in me, I only know in her I'm blessed. Where I was dead, I breathe once more. Where there was pain, there now is peace. Emotion I've never felt before, In her finds sweet release. The mate to my soul I've yet to meet, Still all of my life I've missed her. In her I'm finally made complete, Yet I've never even kissed her. ------------------ Michael Anderson And so, being young and dipt in folly I fell in love with melancholy, But dreams - of those who dream as I, Aspiringly, are damned, and die: EAP [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Chaotic Rumblings New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 8Here, there, everywhere |
Michael, I am sure her heart hears what your lips so eloquently express! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Indeed, sentiment such as this will trip from your lips to fall into her heart, distance not withstanding. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael, she will be kissed by these words ... and masterfully. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Michael....this is absolutely beautiful Gennifer should be very touched by this one. Not too long now and you will finally get that fist kiss. I'm so happy and anxious for you  Ruth ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Do you believe in fate? I do. Fate brought you here just after Femme became a member... it was destiny! I'm so happy for you... and I love your poem...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Michael... though it leaves me aching with longing to have such an effect. *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your words of love are beautiful Michael. Made me recall and wish for the anticipation of that first kiss. |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
Beautiful... ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and touching. I hope your dreams come true. ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, You have no magic latern, But you poem has sent a phantom. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This poem IS a kiss...its wonderful. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
It would be a joy for anyone to be kissed by such a beautiful poem. ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very pretty Michael...your stuff is so damn good! (Get some Certs before ya do kiss her though)....You know?..."If she kissed ya once will she kiss ya again?".....Great work....You, and Balladeer and a few others need to get together a publish a book. In fact, there are so many folks here with talent extraordinaire as yourself, it's a shame it's not "out there" for every one to read!!! |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Did I say I never kissed her? Well, maybe I did once...  Thanks everybody for the replies. Toerag, that a mighty big compliment...and extra big thanks to you. I am working on that book thing. Michael |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
****Standing ovation**** |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Micheal, this is so very beautiful, and I can relate to it very well. Congratulations on this masterpiece, and good luck to the both of you. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Awesome!!! - Know what, PFF? I've seen him and I know for a fact that you're NOT gonna be disappointed...(she says with a wickedly smug grin)....  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
great poem, makes you wonder huh? how much better it will be after the kiss...good luck |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
PFF deserves to be happy...and so do you. When you two first kiss...I know they'll be a poem about it...I'm just patiently waiting. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
** Sigh ** Michael, this is just beautiful....thank you. And thank you to all of you who had such really nice comments about "us".... You people keep me smiling, especially you Michael. This poem touched a part of me way deep down....in my heart...very intimately romantic. (blushing deeply) I am honored as always when you write for me....I will find you tonight, will be on later, ok? Love you.------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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