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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Talent and skill at writing verse, blessing for some, for others curse, flows from fingertips in tales of weal and of woes that outstrips any pleasure coming from such mercurial treasure. From depressive lows come not even poems of woes rage itself burns high and cold seeming to die though filling one with tales untold that remain undone. From manic heights once came spiteful delights fury fueling ever enduring fragments dueling over the rights to my soul that seek more to die than make me whole. Mania, now keys to my writing, leaves the cruelties reigniting the fires of my own desires to put to pen both prose and verse once again reveling in my curse. ©1999 Dream Evil ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 11-16-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I am sorry for your affliction Scott. I do however enjoy your verse. Write on my friend and may you find some solice there. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
See? You are great at freeverse!  I particularly like the 4th stanza - it's very expressive and quite possibly captures the essence of many a poet's motivations. Well done my friend. |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh, that I might be cursed as you are! Wonderful verse, here -- as usual. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Ok this was excellent very great. and so true as every poet has had the same feelings im sure ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
DE, I think anyone who writes poetry or prose is afflicted with something. I have been told we create our own form of insanity. Just bask in it and go on. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Free verse suits you well, Dream, you express yourself well here. LOL at Skyfyre's reply. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother,this is truly excellent,Well Done as always ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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