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Dominance (A Change of Pace) :-)
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Dominance (A Change of Pace) :-) |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I believe this post created enough conflict, therefore....voila! [This message has been edited by Gunslinger (edited 12-02-1999).] |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wow, this is really good. It would be my guess that you find the good and the bad in every relationship, no? ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good! And yes, I try to!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, very nicely done and the answer is definately yes |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent.And Yes I do! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Enjoyed the read. I try to stay in balance, but sometimes the scale tilts but not to far. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved this poem Very well written But girls, don't you think he needs a set of "The Rules"? And I believe in equality,too, but the fact is my husband changed one diaper in his life, and I changed 40,000 ( calculated this one day)while working full time and taking classes. But come time to change a lightbulb, if I don't do it myself, it's a "PROJECT". I liked the poem a lot, gunslinger, but the equality part, I don't think so |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Some do, GS - Some do - It definitely works both ways... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
God took Adam's rib and fashioned little ol' me. She made me 5'2" from my head down to my toes. She said anyplace that Adam went .. I could surely go. I have no vain illusions that men rate the #1 slot. I'll give it consideration, but ... I have a hunch the answer will be ... NOT ! It's serving you well and often, and expecting that you carry your fair share - exactly like I do. Just so you don't get the wrong idea, I like the man who knows how to fall to his knees and admit, he just might appreciate me, a tiny little bit. Trust me, love, I know my place. It's standing by your side, not 'in-your-face' ! Now I'll throw the ball back to you ... I know MY place and duties. Are you sure that you do? Smile And remember- you said God didn't make me a bonehead ! And, you're right ... She didn't ! ~Marge~ ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Hey GS. I want to see this poem. Will you put it back up or email it to me? Cuddlez@collegeclub.com Thanks ------------------ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I feel I owe an apology here, I brought this poem that was here up from the lower pages because I felt it was very well written with an interesting message and now it's been removed by it's author. I guess maybe I should have left a sleeping dog sleep where he was comfortable. So sorry if I caused a mix up, not intended at all. |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Sorry I missed it also... |
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