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mc
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 1999-11-16 02:40 AM


I wonder if the night will bring me comfort
while I wait for the day to bright me up;
for this feeling is keeping me insane
and the light I see no more.

So forever I've sat quietly at night
and wait for the moon to release me at once;
for you, my love, don't show
and I, I dream no more.

And while I wait and wait
I see the night and day go by
and the sorrow in my soul
for the night's comfort...
for you, my love, don't show
and I, I dream no more.






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mcestrada

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-16 08:18 PM


This is very melodious...I like!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-16 08:55 PM


Yes, melodious it is! Very nice. And welcome to Passions!

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Denise


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