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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-15 10:41 PM


Box Full Of Poems
~Marge Tindal~

See, I knew you'd like it.
I wrapped them one by one.
Like a box full of poems...
my thoughts are never done.

Open it up like candy.
Try each tiny slice.
I'll bet you'll find one you like;
one that's really nice.

For like a box of candy,
my aim is to satisfy.
Keep on trying them one-by-one.
You'll like them by and by.

Just as good as chocolate.
A little bit different in taste.
But, unlike the chocolate, a poem,
won't end up 'round your waist!

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-15 11:23 PM


....ummmmmmmm, this one is delicious! Very good, Marge, I enjoyed this! Thank you!

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Denise


Sally S.
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2 posted 1999-11-15 11:28 PM


Well, we almost could live on poems alone, eh??? LOL Nice work.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-11-16 09:37 AM


Mmmm...and much more satisfying to the soul
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 1999-11-16 10:43 AM


Marge,
Taste for taste,
I might prefer your waist. LOL
Good poem.

FreeByrd
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5 posted 1999-11-16 03:46 PM


Picked this one out of the box,it tasted very nice

Continuing to sample

-RS

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Ohme
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6 posted 1999-11-16 05:26 PM


Delicious, Marge. And I didn't gain an ounce!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 1999-11-16 08:10 PM


Denise - Glad you enjoyed.
SallyS - Enough to go around for sure.
Hoot - Glad you are a satisfied soul.
Seymour - Bite for bite, I might enjoy it too.
FreeByrd - Samples are free. Enjoy !
Ohme - Glad you found it 'delicious'.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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