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Box Full Of Poems

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 1999-11-15 10:41 PM

Box Full Of Poems
~Marge Tindal~

See, I knew you'd like it.
I wrapped them one by one.
Like a box full of poems...
my thoughts are never done.

Open it up like candy.
Try each tiny slice.
I'll bet you'll find one you like;
one that's really nice.

For like a box of candy,
my aim is to satisfy.
Keep on trying them one-by-one.
You'll like them by and by.

Just as good as chocolate.
A little bit different in taste.
But, unlike the chocolate, a poem,
won't end up 'round your waist!

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-15 11:23 PM

....ummmmmmmm, this one is delicious! Very good, Marge, I enjoyed this! Thank you!

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Denise

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

2 posted 1999-11-15 11:28 PM

Well, we almost could live on poems alone, eh??? LOL Nice work.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-11-16 09:37 AM

Mmmm...and much more satisfying to the soul

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-11-16 10:43 AM

Marge,
Taste for taste,
I might prefer your waist. LOL
Good poem.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-11-16 03:46 PM

Picked this one out of the box,it tasted very nice

Continuing to sample

-RS

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Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

6 posted 1999-11-16 05:26 PM

Delicious, Marge. And I didn't gain an ounce!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 1999-11-16 08:10 PM

Denise - Glad you enjoyed.
SallyS - Enough to go around for sure.
Hoot - Glad you are a satisfied soul.
Seymour - Bite for bite, I might enjoy it too.
FreeByrd - Samples are free. Enjoy !
Ohme - Glad you found it 'delicious'.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

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