Open Poetry #4 |
~I can't paint but my Grandma can!~ |
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
(I can't paint, but my Grandma can!) my Grandmother has an artist's heart her fingertips can fashion wondrous delights as she sees visions in her mind of oceans and mountains and fields and the desire to paint strikes her brush flying over the blank canvas creating a glimpse into her dreams she always dreamed I'd paint too but my fingers feel like stone when I lift a brush or charcoal to untouched canvas and the beauty in my heart won't make the short trip from mind to paper yet when I pick up a pen to inscribe words of nature's rapturous beauty the vision flows from me and I paint yes I paint with pen and word ------------------ "The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhh! XAngel ... and a masterpiece you penned with this one. Grandma will be proud. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, a lovely picture you have painted here! ------------------ Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Thanks, I should show it to her, but I am a bit nervous LOL ! Poems are such personal things when we share them with people who know us IRL. ~X~ |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Lovely poem, Angel. And your grandmother would be proud. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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MacBeth Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 14 |
Truly X-ellent! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
think this is the X-ception to the rule? LOL hehehe ~X~ ------------------ "The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I tend to disagree...I think you paint just fine, only with a pen instead of a brush |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel, Painting is painting what matters the midium? If you show her your words she might put them to paint. Now would'nt that be nice? Good poem. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely piece X Angel.....a true artist you are...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
like this a lot Xangel, and yep know just what you mean, I openly share with all of you, but rarely does anyone IRL get to read my poems. But I think your grandma would love it....its a tribute to her as well as you |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Indeed, you do create a painting with your words! Nicely said! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think that painting grandma will understand the art of painting words you do so well for they both come from the heart. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
XAngel I think Martie said it. I think Grandma would be really happy! The gifts that come from the heart are the best gifts of all! Excellent painting here! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Thanks you guys so much! It made my day to come home after work tonight and see all these replies. My Grams is important to me! I think I'll give her this for Christmas or something. ~X~ ------------------ "The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
X: And what you write enables a rainbow to display all your colours in true style.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Ah, yes. Paint with a brush, or with a pen But the beauty you're describing Really has no end. |
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