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So Hot ... It Sizzles
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So Hot ... It Sizzles |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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So Hot ... It Sizzles ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 You held me in your arms, the music softly played. We danced the dance of lovers, entranced by the love we made. The tender movements flooding, our bodies with desire. Moving in unison as we approach the lighting of the fire. Swaying and softly moving our hearts knowing full well, there is no turning back... in passion's fire we dwell. So hot it makes one wonder, if we'll be burned by the flame. The heat of passion and desire, so hot, hot, hot, will we ever be the same? The passion subsides, we are now spent. Too much in love, to wonder where the fire went. Ah, but the glowing ember springs to life again. Touched by the gentle sparks that within us remain. It's so hot it sizzles ! It's burning out of control again. Passion has ignited the fire of a lover's flame. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
maybe I am just being ummm "male" but I don't get this Marge...is this poem about bowling?? LOL RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, yeah .... BOWLING ! Well, STRIKE my match and see where you light! LOL ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This sizzles indeed! Another hot one, Marge! Very entertaining! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Yes a little subtle for me too. But the rhyme was excellent. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew...can feel the heat from this one  |
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Lolita Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44Buffalo, NY, America |
PHEW, (loosening collar) I liked this VERY much |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I didn't have a problem with it...in fact I liked this one very much. And I brought my oven mitts.... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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