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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-14 08:50 PM


Consumed By The Fire Of Desire
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

When all pretense has fallen away,
and I stand naked with desire,
will you still want me, as before,
when the flames leaped from the fire?

The fire still warm from the embers,
give off a special glow.
Naked desire will fan them
and the fire we will again know.

Hold me close and love me,
do not let me go.
The flame of desire is burning
hotter than we both know.

Burned by the fires of passion,
seeking to explore.
My love come to me,
I promise you the fire
is even hotter than before.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-11-14 09:07 PM


This one is really beautiful.....

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2 posted 1999-11-14 09:35 PM


Whooo hooo....like this
Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-14 09:42 PM


Hot, Hot, Hot!! Can somebody please turn on the airconditioning in here?! Very good one, Marge.

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Denise


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-11-14 10:17 PM


SD, thanks for the 'beautiful'.
Ruth and Denise ... it's really not as hot as that ! Is it? Yeah, I guess it is !


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5 posted 1999-11-17 07:51 PM


It certainly is hot! Like it.
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6 posted 1999-11-17 07:54 PM


Whew....anyone got a fan? Great one Marge! (and hey...Some Like It Hot! LOL)

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Marge Tindal
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7 posted 1999-11-17 08:04 PM


Temperature seems to be rising.
Guess it's not surprising.
That's the 'passion' of the fire
that consumes us all at sometime
in our lives.
Severn...thank you for liking.
Caroline ... guess you could use the
fan to 'fan the flames'...what'd you think?

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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