Open Poetry #4 |
Backyard thanks |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Backyard Thanks Have I told you how I like the dew in grass that hides my ankles tickling my toes in flip flops, Ludio’s yellow outstretched wings pretending eagle in a birdy wired condo, Needful, that black kink-tailed, rubbing, meow, scratch cat and especially reaching up to that perfect round green with just a hint of the sunrise apple and the crisp juicy sweet tart bite? Well I do. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hey I want a bite too *g* you make it sound delicious |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Very lovely Martie. Wish I had a backyard. : ) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I also enjoy my backyard sooooooo much! This is great! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, nice visuals with that one ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great poem, Martie. I do too. (like it that is) michael |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dew tell, Martie. Another excellent endeavor. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thankyou for the read and comments. You can come visit my backyard any time. I am very lucky to have one I can walk into and close the gate--a perfect place to meditate. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
You definately have a way of bringing out a vision of peace found so simply within the confines of a back yard. Bravo. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
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