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Sven
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0 posted 1999-11-29 11:49 AM


Words on a screen,
A voice on the phone,
A picture only once seen
And yet, a love has grown. . .

Stolen moments that we've shared
Where we revealed what's in our hearts
Partings that became too much to bear
And yet, this is only the start. . .

You're frightened, I know
It's scary for me too
But know that I do love you so
And yet, I know you love me too. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 1999-11-29 03:17 PM


Well written, sven, and yes it is frightening when done that way.

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To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Jewl_24_1999
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2 posted 1999-11-29 05:16 PM


sigh, I feel those words. very good poem!
Ohme
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3 posted 1999-11-29 07:36 PM


Very nice
Nan
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4 posted 1999-12-01 09:36 PM


Oh Yeah!!!
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 1999-12-01 09:39 PM


Sven,
Very well done - liked this alot
Elizabeth

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6 posted 1999-12-01 10:43 PM


Been there, done that and yes, it is frightening.
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