Open Poetry #4 |
She is real |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
She is real In unbelief I tribute, A face could lay the moon away. Eyes of a doe in play, And hair of golden sway. And here beats a heart taken. A soul that is held in awe. Touch by another rapport With eyes that I adore. My heart beats to her rhythm. Subject to a dreamers mind, Essence of grace and kind, A heart without the rind. Harps me into throngs of love, Seconds seem eternity, Gone is uncertainty To endless guaranty. Perhaps I overstate the preen, But most will feel what I mean. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I feel what you mean I know what you feel (You know what I mean) Elizabeth |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too, know that feeling ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Seymour! And I too know what you mean! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Seymour this is so beautiful--I think your words could lay the moon away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Nice answer, thank you much. Isis, I knew you would, thank you. Denise, Thanks for the beautiful, you are one of those hearts without a rind. Martie, Ah! paid back in turn, thank you so much. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my, this is absolutely beautiful. Your talents amaze me ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Read your comment just before retiring and I will sleep well. Thank you. |
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