Open Poetry #4 |
The Dove |
jennysbeau1 Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 10Cornelius, Oregon, USA |
This is a poem I wrote about forever love it's for my angel Jennifer...... The Dove Far off and away in a land called forever, There stands a rock immense as ever. A thousand miles wide and just as deep, This is a rock a thousand miles steep. And once a milineum a tiny dove takes flight, and to this huge rock this dove will alight. He sharpens his beak on this monster stone, And then soars away flying for home. He flies to this rock every one thousand years to sharpen his beak when a milineum nears. And when this rock thus has worn away, Just a second of forever has past that day. So when I tell you forever is my love, Just close your eyes and imagine the dove. ------------------ Remember...write what you love..and love what you write...Terry |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I'm glad it got moved here, its lovely ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem. Michael |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So lovely. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very lovely poem.... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Unique way of putting it! |
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