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The Irony of a good man....
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The Irony of a good man.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
im a good man i believe i am.. ive hit the high notes ive beat the band the only reason to raise my hand is to beg for more of what you have the drug you are to me that keeps me wanting wasting on shelfs im much better though shut up your laugh is pelting on my spine again but im a good man.. so ill let you in to sing your spite to me its dreams like this that makes me apreciate your irony.. ------------------ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I read this several times, so let me see if I get it- the man is tryign to convince himself that he is a good man, while thinking about this woman who has him addicted to the pain she gives..... If so, I can relate to this poem oh too much....it hurts.....If i misinterpreted, I apologize? ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, well done Jackal  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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