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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-13 10:00 PM


i like not feeling
it keeps away the pain
its when i believe this
that i begin to feel the rage..
i just like to lose myself
in the music of my fears
it makes it feel
like ive done something great
after all the tears...





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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-22 05:56 AM


I have felt this way myself.
Good poem.

littleJas
Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39
Australia
2 posted 1999-12-22 08:54 AM


I have had similar feelings before , I liked it very much.
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 1999-12-22 08:55 AM


A lot of feel in a few words
Very nice
Liz

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