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Cupid’s Christmas Gift (Sonnet promised to Kess)
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Cupid’s Christmas Gift (Sonnet promised to Kess) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Cupid’s Christmas Gift When least expected Cupid shot his dart To fin’lly exile echoes of the past My tilts at windmills, tearing up my heart Rememb’ring pain my mind so long harrassed His love like sunshine from behind a cloud A rainbow’s gift upon a dreary day Declaring universal love aloud A single tear to cleanse the past away As touched by Angel’s wings is how I feel Embraced by love so true and real by he My spirit wanders free, my soul will heal The love of God lies in the depth of me. A new beginning, Christmas will somehow be better yearly, we’re a fam’ly now. Munda |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Munda, I enjoyed. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Enchanting, Munda. And where have you been? I do believe your work has been missed here!  It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Munda I enjoyed this! How wonderful! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Munda, very sweet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! Wonderful sonnet! Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
WOW..... Excellent, Munda.... Perfect iambic pentameter... Rhyme scheme intact.. Theme development.... You get an "A" for sure.... I'm dancin'...... |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
HUGE grins ... Munda, this is absolutely lovely -- I am so honored that you wrote it at my request. I agree with Nan -- but is there anything better than an "A?"  --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda - Wonderful ! Perfectly wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Mike, Whtdove, Ruth, Denise, Marge....thank you for reading and your comment. I appreciate it a lot. : ) Caroline...thanks for your kind words and missing me. : ) I am a bit busy at the moment, but I'll peep in whenever I can. : ) Nan....an A ????? and dancing ???? Oops I'm blushing ! ; ) Kess.....is there anything better than an A ? Yes, your compliment. : ) Thanks Kess for your lessons. See you in the Workshop. : ) Merry Christmas to you all ! Munda : ) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
wow...what a great sonnet...i wish that i could write them but that would take actual talent...the one thing that i lack..great job though! Starboards |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply Wonderful Munda.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Starboards: Thank you and LOL believe me, sonnets are NOT my forte, it's a 'fight', so please try it some day, you may surprise yourself. : ) Pepper: : ) Thank you : ) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent, Munda A lovely sonnet, I enjoyed it! Liz |
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