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Kevin Taylor
Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

0 posted 1999-12-23 04:30 AM

Lady
Lady
Wrote some verse.
Couldn't figure
which was worse;
Folks that laugh
or folks that curse.

She gently placed it
in a drawer
hidden there
with several more.
Hidden from the prying eyes,
Sheltered from such cruel lies.
A gentler death?
A sweeter sleep?
Her words unspoken
only weep
For wing and sky
to soar within;
to live or die
upon the wind!

So which the worse,
then - laugh or curse?
Or one who buries living verse?

Kevin

"With oar on gunwale sounding role the village fishers flocked to sea"

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-12-23 08:01 AM

I like your poem, Kevin, but methinks the photo is not current?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 1999-12-23 08:24 AM

Kevin
Kevin
Beautiful verse.
Ladies don't 'bury' your verse,
we 'tuck' it away for tripping
through memories in another time.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-12-23 12:14 PM

Well Hello Kevin....so nice to see you here...I've enjoyed your site for many months now....Welcome to Passions

Enjoyed your poem!!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-12-23 01:22 PM

Kevin,
Very clever, Enjoyed the read.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-12-23 01:27 PM

APPLAUDS!!! This is fantastic. And in answer to your question, since I've been there, definately burying the verse. I love the flow to this one and the rhyme, not to mention the great content. Looking forward to more

Kevin Taylor
Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

6 posted 1999-12-23 06:52 PM

Thank you & you're right about the picture... I'm trying to get the "right" one uploaded.

Kevin

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-12-23 08:46 PM

Love it!

Denise

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