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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
" strange " Unsporting friends, caring enemies Loss of feeling to the mind Endless thinking, discard reality No vision of words to be An inner source of strength Pushing towards the the top Unknown people surrounded by friends Watching, observing, looks of uncomfort Forget the meaning of life's importance Living alone but with company See visions of futures history Adventure not thought about Now inspiration to go forth A light to show the way Toward tommorrows end [This message has been edited by littleJas (edited 12-26-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sounds a little lonely, A feeling craftily conveyed Liz |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
The first stanza pulled me in, because that's how I think things really are, unfortunately. --A Little Fairy-- |
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