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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-22 12:00 PM


Little Blue Butterfly
~Marge Tindal~ 1999



On softest flight
across the yard
of petals
yet to find
you flit
and
come to
light
gently
in my
mind

Little
butterfly
of brilliant blue
flutter by
and
as you do

Touch
my heart
continue
your flight
Little
blue butterfly
on your
cycle
through life




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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1 posted 1999-12-22 12:07 PM


Oh.....so lovely Marge  
Most fitting.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
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2 posted 1999-12-22 01:47 PM


This is pretty.

 --A Little Fairy--

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 1999-12-22 01:53 PM


Oh, I can't wait til Kamla wakes up to find this!
It's so beautiful, Marge
Love ya,
Liz

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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4 posted 1999-12-22 02:42 PM


Told ya    Peace for Christmas!
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
5 posted 1999-12-22 03:07 PM


Lovely, Marge.
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-12-22 03:27 PM


Marge(y) - I woke up and of course went straight to he computer (because of course I am a self confessed addict... ) - and what do I find? A beautiful, light poem of flight...from a dear friend.

Robert was right - this is beautiful - and I love your poetic responses.

Thankyou my friend - you've already made my day!!!

Hugs, Kamla.

starboards
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since 1999-10-14
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7 posted 1999-12-22 03:32 PM


Marge...great word usage...i could really see a picture of a little blue butterly...this one was sweet and light...i liked it!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Denise
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8 posted 1999-12-23 01:46 AM


Yes, this is beautiful, Marge!

 Denise



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 1999-12-23 01:55 AM


Pepper -
Thanks ... she is special.

Fairy Colours -
So glad you liked it my dear.

Elizabeth, my friend -
Yes, I think she'll like it ...
it fits her to a tee !

RSEvans -
You were right !  
It did deserve it's own spot.

OhMe -
Thank you.

Severn/Kamla/Little Blue Butterfly -
Ahhhhhhhh ... about time, sleepyhead.
It is YOU !  'Nuff said.

Starboards -
Just like our Kammie ... sweet and light.

Denise -
So glad you found this one.
Isn't it just like Severn?
She sure inspires.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Christopher
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10 posted 1999-12-23 05:40 AM


She DOES inspire Marge!
And it appears that there are few immune to her charm!
Beautiful and fitting!

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 1999-12-23 07:48 AM


Christopher -

Yes, she is and draws
us to her like the
butterfly is drawn
to the flower.

Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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