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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
**Please be nice. It's my first time posting in here...** Unlucky One Words slip out... Out his sugar coated lips... Lips that have denied many... Many except for me... Me, the unlucky one. < !signature--> "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 Sad - short and sad. Here's a  for you...K |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ouch - sometimes it's not so fun to be on top of the list. Much can be read into these simple lines, I can only offer you Hope things get better for you. (And we'll treat you nice here, I promise). btw, I would change the font color here - kind of hard on the eyes. michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks severn...your comments are always welcome... michael...thank you for commenting, you are a familar face... "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This says so much with so few words...now that takes talent! I enjoyed this one starboards! Denise |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks denise..as i've always loved reading your poems! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ashley - Not to worry ... it's good. Welcome as a poem poster. I've already enjoyed your comments. You live just a hop - skip - and jump away from me. Merry Christmas. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Marge-- it would appear that we are indeed neighbors! Thanks for replying...merry X-mas to you too...!!! Ashley "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Starboards hon, you aren't unlucky. The only unlucky thing for you was that you ever met this jerk!! Merry Christmas. Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- actually, believe it or not, this wasnt written for the "jerk" but for some other jerk right before he came along...oh well...what's the difference right? thanx, merry X-mas to you! Ashley "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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