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Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

0 posted 1999-12-21 11:24 PM

DOES SHE KNOW

Often, I wonder does she know
I feel it when she cries -
And just how deep it pains me so
I cannot dry her eyes.

Often, I wonder does she feel
Me by her side at night.
Or believe the dream to be real,
When nothing else seems right.

Could a single notion from me
Give warmth from bitter cold -
Bring her a smile for all to see
From a heart of pure gold.

Can the eyes within a picture
Show love to one unseen.
In hers my heart is set astir,
Mi-Lady and my Queen.

I sing her to sleep every night,
In dream I hold her near.
Where gleaming eyes by the twilight
Never again may tear.

Is there more to do, I wonder,
The days, they pass so slow.
I'd give up all to be with her,
Still I wonder, does she know?

Michael Anderson

starboards
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since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-21 11:30 PM

I hope she knows, Michael! Great job once again! I hope to see more of your poems!

Starboards

"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

2 posted 1999-12-21 11:39 PM

Stunning, Michael. Does she know? Yes! I love reading the poems the two of you write for each other.

It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-12-21 11:42 PM

Is there a language beyond words? You express it so very well.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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4 posted 1999-12-21 11:55 PM

Beautiful, Michael! Yes, she knows!

Denise

Beri
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since 1999-11-25

Posts 149

5 posted 1999-12-21 11:55 PM

Beautiful Michael! And I am certain she knows just how lucky of a woman she is!

If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-12-22 12:32 PM

How could she not know with all the love you write for her?

Beautiful, just beautiful.

K

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

7 posted 1999-12-22 12:40 PM

Another great one Micheal. Does she know ? I think so ! : )
Merry Christmas to both of you.

Munda

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

8 posted 1999-12-22 01:18 AM

Michael, you know in your heart that she knows..

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Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

[This message has been edited by WildChild (edited 12-22-1999).]

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

9 posted 1999-12-22 05:09 AM

Beautiful, Michael,
Why don't you send her this poem and melt her heart!
Liz

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

10 posted 1999-12-22 02:04 PM

I would think that even if she didn't know before, she certainly does now. Personally, I think that since she was smart enough to land you, she has known for a long time.

If a woman decides you are hers then you are doomed and your fate is sealed, not that it is such a bad fate with the right woman.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02

Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US

11 posted 1999-12-22 02:11 PM

I really felt this poem. As well as the others. I had to say awww, out loud a few times.

--A Little Fairy--

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

12 posted 1999-12-22 02:26 PM

really beautiful poem Michael...it is hard sometimes as the distance dulls the feelings and make you ache to reach out and pull them close......great job

and ROFG@dream's doomed comment

samsonheart
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since 1999-12-20

Posts 72
Missouri rez.

13 posted 1999-12-22 03:42 PM

I could really feel the emotion in this, Michael. Great job on a beautiful poem.

samsonheart

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

14 posted 1999-12-22 05:13 PM

Awww.....Michael - it's just as beautiful as when you read it over the phone! I love it when you read to me a poem over the phone, and then I get to come here and see it....where I can read it slower....soaking up every word...and sometimes you get that little "frog" in your throat when you read them to me....

So, I just want to say thank you again darling...this is truly beautiful. And yes, I do know. I love you.
(chuckling at DE's humor !) You know Dream, you're quite the guy! I knew you'd see it my way eventually! LOL ......sigh......he IS mine.

- - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

15 posted 1999-12-22 05:38 PM

Good poem Michael. You've explained yourself very well on this one.

Nathan

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

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Arkansas

16 posted 1999-12-22 06:16 PM

Hey sweetie! I love you...I see you're wandering around in here too, 'eh? ***kisses Thank you for this beautiful poem, although I know I already said something along that line....

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