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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-12-21 11:09 PM


Troubled eyes
find your way
to fall upon my face,
and realize
that here today
you’ll find a better place.
Don’t look behind
do not waste tears
just walk ahead with me
And you will find
in coming years
forever we will be.


© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-12-21 11:17 PM


The longing, encouragement and hope are all in there.  Very nice.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-21 11:52 PM


This is beautiful, Kevin. I like this very much!

 Denise



Beri
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 149

3 posted 1999-12-22 12:00 PM


Beautiful Kevin!  
Whomever this is adressed to is indeed a very lucky individual!  I must say I wish it were me!  


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


samsonheart
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since 1999-12-20
Posts 72
Missouri rez.
4 posted 1999-12-22 02:49 AM


good poem Kevin, I like this a lot.

samsonheart

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 1999-12-22 05:07 AM


Short and sweet and very nice
Liz

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