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How can I love somebody else...
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How can I love somebody else... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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How can I love somebody else but thee, Whose image is reflected in my cup? For even when my eyes refuse to see, My dreams displaying thee will never stop! How can I live abreast of my desire, And hear that heartbeat echo as my own? When from within, there burns a sacred fire, How can I love and be as cold as stone? Oh, lengthy hours, teach me to ignore, So I may look upon him with no feeling, So I may gaze into my cup and not adore The beauty of the man who’s so appealing. How must I live against myself opposed? Consume my pride?—Oh, I’ll be overdosed! I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Keep those sonnets comin' Master... trochaic "ing" words and all....  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very Nice |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Master: You're truly becoming a Master.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Master, That's about as good as you can say it. Enjoyed the read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Your name fits you my friend. . . Excellent work! That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
It takes alot to be able to write sonnets, and you seem to have all the qualifications...nice work. "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I thank you all for the support and kind responses! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Master, this took my breath away! 'ings' and all! Absolutely beautiful! You seem to be getting very good at the iambic pentameter! Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
You mean I got it this time? Wow, sometimes I amaze myself! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You got the meter down pat! Excellent! Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Denise! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Had to bring this back up...it is so beautiful! Denise |
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