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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 1999-12-21 10:01 PM

Long ago this heart was shattered.
I can't remember why, it doesn't even matter.
It was hard to chase the ghosts from my past,
And to realize theat dreams don't always last.

Fearing tomorrow and missing yesterday,
I was left all alone with a new game to play.
I was laughing out loud, but crying within.
Not knowing if I could ever trust again.

But the sands of time slipped by.
And the dark veil lifted and swept across the sky.
Life was once again calling to me.
And these chains vanished setting my heart free.

At first I wandered around in delusion and doubt.
Wondering just what life was all about.
But I kept searching, hoping to find
Those magical dreams etched in the back of my mind.

A new facet of tomorrow is what I found.
And a new wheel of dreams spin round and round.
This time I'll be careful with the dream I take,
As I will have to live with the choice I make.

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-21 10:13 PM

Beautiful poem.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-21 10:19 PM

Life is all about new beginnings...everyday! Wonderful poem, Eloise!

Denise

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 1999-12-21 11:00 PM

Thank you Dolphin.

Denise - as always thanks.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-12-21 11:03 PM

YES, WE DO HAVE TO LIVE WITH THE CHOICES WE MAKE. GOOD POEM, ELOISE.

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 1999-12-21 11:36 PM

Great poem about living and learning, hurting and healing.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

6 posted 1999-12-21 11:39 PM

Yes! Great poem about living and learning from choices...although some bad...once again great job!

Starboards

"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

7 posted 1999-12-22 01:47 AM

Thanks Balladeer, sandgrain and starboards I appreciate the comments.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-04-15 05:28 AM

I'm glad I came across this one tonight
excellent write!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-11-12 04:23 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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