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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 84
Rhode Island, US

0 posted 1999-12-21 09:38 PM


Days go by without you here
When I cannot see your face;
Those lonely times of missing you
I wish could be replaced.

Replace them with your hand in mine,
When you are by my side;
Replace them with your warming smile,
Instead of nights I've cried.

Replace them with your sweet caress,
Your loving, heartfelt touch;
Replace them with your big brown eyes,
Those eyes I miss so much.

Replace them with your soothing hugs,
That take away my fears;
Replace them with your gentle hands
That wipe away my tears.

Replace my time away from you
With this and so much more;
Forever I'll be in debt to you,
The one that I adore.


*I can't wait till I see you again Justin...I miss you so much  

© Copyright 1999 Jessica Sousa - All Rights Reserved
JD
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
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1 posted 1999-12-21 09:45 PM


I love you Jessica and I will see you soon and wipe away your tears of sadness. I miss you too...  

I love u Jessica

Ur loveing Boyfiend Justin



 Everything Dies



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-21 10:33 PM


This is sooooooo beautiful! Congratulations you two lovebirds!  

 Denise



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