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I'll Be Along (repost for RSEvans)
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I'll Be Along (repost for RSEvans) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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I'm lost in thought, again, I see < !signature-->Another mem'ry calling me I gently slip into the past I'll be right back, I'll be real fast. I linger there...perhaps too long But can't you hear that lovely song? How can I leave before it's done? That soothing strain has just begun. What's that you say...it's time to go? There's work to do, of course, I know You go ahead, I'll be along I need to hear just one more song... Another lovely melody Another mem'ry calling me. Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Oh can I relate to this....like rushing somewhere then sitting in the parking lot to hear just a little more of one on the car radio. Thanks |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is beautiful, Denise. Nice melody. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Loved this....Glad you reposted it. Share what you are for you are what you share |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Here's to those moments that bring a smile to our face. Those moments that we slip back and slow down! Thanks Denise  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Sandgrain, Balladeer, First Knight and Rebecca for reading and commenting! Here's to those memories!! (pretend you see two champaign glasses clinking together...hehehehehe!!) Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A sweet melody this one was - flows beautifully. Wonderful read. michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yes - songs bring back those memories, that's for certain. Another great poem, Denise. K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, Good memories do beckon us and hold our attention this way Very beautifully written Liz |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
We both have lost someone near and dear And neither dwell in the past I fear But for this refrain I'll say it clear Thank You, Denise. You're such a dear. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Try as I might to focus on your refrain...my mind keeps wandring back again... ;-) How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Michael, Severn, Elizabeth, RS and Local Rebel for reading and for your kind comments! You all here at Passions are such a wonderful part of my life! Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write thanks for this Denise |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful  i really enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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