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Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
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0 posted 1999-12-21 04:18 PM


Thanks  
But I'm going to delete this one, and see if I can come up with another one that's better. I didn't post it in public because I didn't think it qualified as a good poem.

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 12-21-1999).]

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-12-21 09:30 PM


Moving this to open #4, where it can recieve more replies and attention.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 1999-12-21 09:54 PM


Like your picturesque wording.  It really brought feeling.  Thanks
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