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Double Love |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
These are two separate poems, if read from top to bottom, but can be read as one poem, when read from left to right. Does anybody know what this type of poetry is called ? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A son and daughter are all mine A little lass and little lad a girl so gay, really divine naughty at times, but never bad my handsome boy, a vagebond the cutest two you’ve ever seen a true brother and sister bond no-one ever comes in between Although they fight and shed a tear I love ‘em dearly from the heart for their tie I will never fear nothing can break this love apart there a smile ! reunited love a hug so tight and then a kiss their way home they’ll find like a dove and their love I need never miss Munda |
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Coegwyr Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 35 |
I know, I know!!!! It’s called beautiful poetry. [This message has been edited by Coegwyr (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Excellent work Munda... Prettige Kerstdagen en een Gelukkig Nieuwjear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Munda, First a wonderful poem Second I've tried it before but don't know if it has a name. I finally got to the point of seven different reads. Up and down, backward and forward. Top to bottom, bottom to top. First line third line second line forth line. and then the oposite. First line forth line third line second line. And on and on. It's not that it can't be done but for me it lost its fun. as I said you have a wonderful poem and experimentation can be fun. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda ... I know ... ASK NAN ... she knows I'll bet! If it doesn't have a name, it should. I say let's call it a ~Shufflette~ because it looks like shuffling a deck of cards to me. Whatever it is ... it's lovely. I just may have to try one of these one night when the muse wants to burn the midnight oil. Thank you for this intriguing scheme. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I think it's called "Double Delight" That's what I got from it, anyway Lovely poem(s) Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I'd call it amazing Munda! Wow, did I love this!  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Coegwyr: Thank you ! : ) Mike: : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) Pretty soon you'll speak as good Dutch as I do. ; ) Sy: Thank you. : ) I haven't tried all that yet. LOL I may some day. Marge: : ) Why didn't I think of that ! Shufflette ! Perhaps we better not tell Nan, she may turn it into a Workshop topic some day. ; ) Liz: Thank you ! Pepper: HUGS ! Merry Christmas to you all. : ) |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Intriguing, Munda. I have never see such before. [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Munda you are too clever!!! Merry Christmas to you and yours Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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