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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
The seconds feel like minutes, Minutes feel like hours, And hours feel like days -- It just seems to drag on -- Longer and longer. How long will I have to endure this feeling? This pain in my heart -- This emptiness in my soul? The days turn to weeks, Weeks turn to months, Months turn to years -- But I still mourn for what could be -- It goes on and on. If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I don't know the answer but I do know the feeling...I guess for me, laughter helps and you find yourself laughing amongst people here on PIP...just can't be helped, either that or you find yourself crying for someone elses sorrow and then your own seems so minute..  May tomorrow be all that you wish for and more besides! HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Yes, Rainbow, you are so right, you do find yourself laughing amongst the members of PIP. For that I am grateful! Thanx for the kind words! If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Beri. I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Yes, it does seem like minutes, hours, days, months and even years but once you get over that someone and allow yourself to breathe you shall find happiness once more! Starboards  "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thanks Denise! Star, Yes, I agree and I am trying! Thank you. And by the way, I love your quote...I'll have to remember that one.If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Time can seem eternal when it's filled with pain, but things always lighten up when hurts are shared with caring friends. Once beyond, in retrospect we know nothing lasts forever. Nice poem. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hard feelings to go through, Beri - and 'm glad you have the power of poetry to express them through - good work. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I hate to say it but as long as you feel it "could" be, you will mourn it. It will hurt till you let go, which I know is not an easy thing to do by any means. ((HUGS)) to you. Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A day can seem like a month when you're in love. You expressed it well Good poem! Liz |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thanks to all of you for your kind words. Severn, I am glad I have the power of poetry also, Sometimes I dont know what I would do without it!  If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Sometimes it seems the time stands still and yet again -- it seems like a lifetime ago. The human condition. How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You spoke what's in my heart Beri... Hugs.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Time does seem to drag on if you're bored out of your mind. I like this because I can relate. --A Little Fairy-- |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I suppose its all a matter of degrees... the depth of your fall is half the distance you must climb. Note: A second is officially defined as the duration of 9,192,631,770 oscillations of the radiation emitted by a cesium 133 atom when undergoing hyperfine transition at zero magnetic field. Oh... and a "jiffy" is considered to be 1/100th of a second. That's over 900 billion oscillation per jiffy. Considering that, have ya ever known anybody to really be there in a jiffy? [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Thanks for the insight Andrew! Haha, I must say nope, noone has ever been there in a "jiffy!" Tnanks to all of you. Oh, and Fairy, glad you can relate! If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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