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What's In The Cards ? Part 1
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What's In The Cards ? Part 1 |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
To cast off ties That earthly bind And free the soul To lift the mind Unfettered flight Of spirit soar We shall dwell In dark no more Examine thoughts Stripped free of guile Seen unshrouded Lament this while In light of truth Where less is more I pause at yet Another door Sometimes nonsense isn't . |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Getting philosophical on us? I see much in reading this piece. Thought provoking work. Michael |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
It looks as if we share a common window on the view of the afterworld. Well done here Dr. Moose. On to part II. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wait for me Andrew...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent! Very thought provoking and a great message. Denise |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Michael, Thanks for the comments , I'll hold off on the philosophical , for a while . |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Deep indeed... K |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Andrew , Glad you liked this . |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nan , d , and Severn , Thank you all , will hopefully see you on part two . |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Dear Bullwinkle, All this serious stuff is making me believe you're getting well....That's a scarey thought yanno?.... (sometimes Toerag isn't) [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 12-22-1999).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Hey Toe, Not as serious as you may think . It could be the subject here attempts to cast off any pre-concieved notions of the world and his place in it , retreating when unable to accept the uncertainty his vision brings .Still, driven to justify his existence in relationship to everything around him , he returns again and again , gaining wisdom not in achieving his lofty goal , but in the attempt . Or... I was probably just checking to see if anyone would notice there were only 52 words in each part . Doc |
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