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RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-11-12 11:17 PM

Fascination

Touching waters
Feeling wet
Dipping in
Ripples flow
Through me

Striking match
Tinder dry
Leaping flames
Singeing heat
Burns me.

Emotions grow
Beating heart
Tingling body
Kisses drip
On me.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-12 11:25 PM

What a fascinating piece!

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Denise

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-11-13 01:37 AM

Liked this Much! esp.."kisses drip on me"...great.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-11-13 08:34 AM

Oh my, I do so like this one....so few words, but not a one wasted. Nicely done Robert

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

4 posted 1999-11-13 08:57 AM

Thanks Ruth...I see you are up early this morning!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 1999-11-13 09:13 AM

Fire and water intermingled ... interesting.
I like it.

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Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

6 posted 1999-11-13 09:21 AM

I agree, RobertB. This says so much.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-11-13 10:11 AM

Smiles...up early Robert? I work the night shift 11Pm-7:30 Am, just haven't been to bed yet is all

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

8 posted 1999-11-13 11:03 AM

lol..I forgot hoot....but then with a nick like hoot_owl how could I?????

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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9 posted 1999-11-13 12:01 PM

Robert this is a great piece of poetry

I love the succint style, and the lines~~

Kisses drip
on me

Brilliantly done

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

10 posted 1999-11-13 12:06 PM

Great job Rob-B.....very interesting style!

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