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DanielMc New Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 4 |
Wait When we walk through the park, And talk 'til dark. I need to know! If I give you all that I am, And I hold your precious hand. If I whisper sweet nothings in your ears, And wipe away each loving tear. Will you still make me wait? 'Til our wedding night. When I get the nerve to say I love you, And if I always stay true. I need to know! If I promise to love you forever, And leave you never. Will you still make me wait? 'Til our wedding night. When we are missing each other, And decide to be together. I need to know! If I was to bring you chocolates and flowers, And if we stay up talking for hours. Will you still make me wait? 'Til our wedding night. When we decide to move, Cause we have no room. I need to know! If I build our house with my bare hands, And our own plans. If I do all this. Will you still make me wait? 'Til our wedding night. If this is true my dear I must confess, You must be my lover, my friend, my soulmate. written by Daniel McIntosh For his soulmate |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
You are so sweet. I think it would be well worth the wait, no? I wanted to cry. Does this poem relate to you? --A Little Fairy-- |
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DanielMc New Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 4 |
thanks all my poems are about how I feel unconscious - was a dream I had always and forever - is about those special words Ive used but have not used enough wait - is for my soulmate to figure out |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Each line just pulls you to read on, read on. The ending is beautiful, wish more people felt this way. Thanks. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Anything about love, I do have to reply!  And waiting is best, it will make it more special on your wedding night. It is a gift that only she can give to you...Welcome to passions! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Anything about love, I do have to reply! And waiting is best, it will make it more special on your wedding night. It is a gift that only she can give to you...Welcome to passions! "Unto every life, A little love must fall!" |
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