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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Life, an ocean... Waves... Tossing,turning, open space, Wind... Salty is its taste, Bitter is my friend, Storms... Raging all around me, Rain is falling, Night... Darkness comes, Fear invades, There is light, Through clouds of confusion, Anchor... The master of the sea, Life... Then I breathe, Hope... New horizons, Uncharted journeys, Peace... Fear has escaped, calmness is beauty, Love... The great pearl, One of sacrifice, Life... The ocean of endless possibilities. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is excellent, Romantic Heart, well written. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh I agree...very well done! I like this much  It's beautiful!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Wow! I must have written something right, knowing I received a great compliment from you balladeer!!!! Made my day THANKS CAROLINE! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 12-19-1999).] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This one runs a deep as the ocean.....and has left me with my eyes futher opened in revelation. This is wonderful Romantic Heart Share what you are for you are what you share |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy your poem ver much!!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree with all the above, simply beautiful!  Denise |
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far and away Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 20 |
Wonderful poem and very well writen, I enjoy it very much! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
First Knight-Deep is the thoughts I often think! I am glad your eyes have been opened! Van-Thank you for your gracious comment! De-Thanks my friend your commments are always uplifting! Far and away-Welcome to passions I am glad you liked the poem! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Interesting poem, i love this topic, it's so serine and beautiful, hope i get the pleasure of reading more of these! Starboards |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Starboards and welcome to passions! "Unto every life, A little love must fall!" |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
This one has such great imagery. I was very impressed, loved it. -samsonheart |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoy free verse, but cannot write it as well as you..this is lovely! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Samson...like the name! Poet Devine, thanks for the compliment...honestly I didn't know what form of poetry I was writting, I just wrote it as I was posting and did what came naturally....So this is free verse! Wow! |
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