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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-20 10:11 PM


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My eyes are drifting on a mission
To prove the pleading heart correct.
To find and seize the apparition
And to disclose its full effect,
With which infected to affection,
My heart has ceased to dream of love
And it no longer seeks perfection,
For even that won’t be enough!

****

Upon the ink I write with paper.
I beg you, read between the lines!
So I may add a bit of flavor
Into these, flavor-lacking times.
Acknowledge me as if a poet,
For every drawing needs a frame.
And one fine day, for one fine moment,
I just might earn your true acclaim!



 I fell in love and kept on falling


© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-12-20 10:23 PM


These are great Master! I enjoyed them very much!  

 Denise



sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 1999-12-20 10:26 PM


Wow, such high standards...even perfection's not enough....you definitely painted pictures I'd frame.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-12-20 10:26 PM


You have earned my acclaim with these! Good job!  

Master
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since 1999-08-18
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4 posted 1999-12-20 11:49 PM


Thank you!
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