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Open Poetry #4

Two short poems

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-20 10:11 PM

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My eyes are drifting on a mission
To prove the pleading heart correct.
To find and seize the apparition
And to disclose its full effect,
With which infected to affection,
My heart has ceased to dream of love
And it no longer seeks perfection,
For even that won’t be enough!

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Upon the ink I write with paper.
I beg you, read between the lines!
So I may add a bit of flavor
Into these, flavor-lacking times.
Acknowledge me as if a poet,
For every drawing needs a frame.
And one fine day, for one fine moment,
I just might earn your true acclaim!

I fell in love and kept on falling

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-20 10:23 PM

These are great Master! I enjoyed them very much!

Denise

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

2 posted 1999-12-20 10:26 PM

Wow, such high standards...even perfection's not enough....you definitely painted pictures I'd frame.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-12-20 10:26 PM

You have earned my acclaim with these! Good job!

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-12-20 11:49 PM

Thank you!

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