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amandafoose
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since 1999-12-20
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0 posted 1999-12-20 07:45 PM



Turn your head from the innocent
And close your eyes with shame
Take away your goals and dreams
And replace it with your pain

Give in to the hopeless
The forgotten and ashamed
Open up and swallow
Your life will never be the same

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 1999-12-20 09:11 PM


This is very intense. I enjoyed this very much!

 Denise



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