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Open Poetry #4

Let Me Be Heard!

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-12-20 05:27 PM

I just want to shout
At the top of my lungs
From the rooftop of the highest building
In New York City

I want all to hear my cries
So that I can be relieved of this heaviness
Located in the bottem left corner of my heart

I just want to shout
Until my throat is raw
To get a simple message across
That if I hurt this deep within
Others must be clawing at the mountain in vain

Under silence my voice is expressed
But I must shout, cry out, in distress!
Let me be heard
Help me!
I give you my bellowing words!

JOY

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-12-20 05:38 PM

Powerful! I like this!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-12-20 05:48 PM

This is excellent, displaying many emotions....hurt, pain, frustration, anger, etc. Well written.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-20 08:59 PM

Yes, very emotional and powerful. Well done!

Denise

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