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amandafoose Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 11 |
Tears fall And I lay saddened by the night And its dreary cycloptic eye staring at my body The sounds continue Those itter bitter sounds that make you worse I sense death Someone has to be dying right now I weep harder And realize I could be next |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AmandaFoose - Such sorrow, written well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is sad. Sometimes these thoughts hit us from out of the blue! I try not to dwell on them. Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Passions. This is a sad one, but don't dwell on the fact that it could be you. Instead be thankful it wasn't you! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Someone very wise said life is so much more meaningful once we've looked death in the face. Tho to some it's morbid thinking, to me it's reality, just another part of life. I really enjoyed your writing. |
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