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A definition
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A definition There is a spot within us all, Where catch as can and all does fall. And it floats in and out our themes. But mostly in and out our dreams. It's something that we can't negate, Perhaps I think a part of fate. And seems to guide us through our life. Whether loving heart or damning strife. It instigates our very roam, All our phantoms and our poems. Our fantasies, our life and true. Our thoughts of all but mostly you. You cannot see this thing in see, But feel the largeness that it be. Nor can you weigh the weight of it. Nor can you call the brave of it. It's only attributes its goal, Some call it by the name of soul. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
What a great way to describe one's soul...i couldnt have described it better myself... Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
no kidding seymour, if you could capture the soul on paper.....you just did...great job  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Best definition I've ever heard! Good one!  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: I like this - a lot! HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I liked your lovely definition Of that phantom apparition And yours does truly overflow With grace and wisdom we all know It holds the contents of your whole This phantom by the name of soul This is very beautiful Love ya, Liz I know I posted a response to this poem quite a while ago, but perhaps I posted it on the wrong poem. It may turn up where we least expect. |
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samsonheart Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 72Missouri rez. |
Seymour, very good job! I loved this poem. samsonheart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Starboard, Thanks for the great, I appreciate. lloveit, Thanks for the capture and great job. PoetdeVine, Thanks for the best definition I take that as a huge comp. *L* DG, Alot means alot to me. *L* Liz, Got your Email after I posted this poem, so you see my gnomes are still gnomen. It's almost like gnomen in the roamen or roamen in the gnomen, what ever. Love ya Sy. Samsonheart, Your good job and love this poem made my day. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The soul is so hard to define...you've done well |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Kind of you to say what you said, thank you much. *L* Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Sy! You have described it well! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I call it indigestion but soul works, too. Nice poem, Sy. Well thought out and presented |
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