Open Poetry #4 |
perceptions of me and you |
Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
just because I smile when you come' round and I never fail to tell you you are the cutest thing in town and yes, I know its obvious how much I really care, you needn't feel you must remind me that we are… just friends. I am absolutely aware that I am not your everything… [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Unrequited love...oh how sad |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Ouch...been there too, K....it hurts!!.... < !signature--> A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 12-20-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well it doesn't hurt as much as it makes me mad....I never asked for more....am happy with what we have....just wanna kick him when he thinks I need reminding lolol....and you know somehow it helps...just to post the anger...am feeling a bit better....well that and that I sent it to him too *g* thanks you two |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hey, hope you added one massive kick from me as well, enough to send him hopping for cover...stupid man!!! Big HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Three cheers for sending it! *G* You may have written it from anger... but it resonates with sadness... or maybe it's just that I can relate. *S* Well done! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
lol@hopping for cover *grin* nope didn't send a kick from you.....but I can if you want lol and suthern, I know...'bout the sadness thing, but....such is life....sigh...thanks |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is not something that should happen to a person as nice as you are, lovey. He should accept your feelings and feel lucky. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
He is the cutest thing in town ? ... huh, you mean bar me ?? ... Very well written .. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
He is so very very cute To sentiments it seems he's mute I like how you jumped out the rut And kicked his cute little butt Liz |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well, He did say himself he needs his ass kicked upon occasion |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Local Rebel: And he was right! LOL. WELCOME, feathered one!!! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Balladeer what a sweet thing to say...sometimes though it does a person good to get mad and stick up for ones self...hugs JTF lolol as cute as you are....gonna have to give him first place....*g* Elizabeth lol very cute poem thanks LR well gee, you didn't tell me I could do it in poetry form.....woulda kicked it for you long ago....lol....hugs and more hugs suthern *big big smiles* [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
In refrain I quote to him, Undeserving son of sin, How dare you ignore that which blooms In Iloveit's pantaloons! Sad to see such heartfelt emotion wasted on such heartless persons.... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
It's damn hard to ignore when she isn't wearing any.... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG@not wearing any.....ROFG.....shhhhhhh LR you two are going to have everyone wondering about my pantaloons ... or lack thereof lolol RS....thank you for the sentiment...but no...not heartless at all, he makes me feel alive....sigh...it does me good to get mad once in a while, shakes me out of my "I wish" world and into enjoying the smiles in reality....thanks ROFG@Iloveit's pantaloons [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Good job lloveit! This poem is unique! And that's how some people are for real. Nathan |
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