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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM

0 posted 1999-12-20 09:45 AM


just because
I smile when you come' round
and I never fail to tell you
you are the cutest thing in town
and yes, I know its obvious
how much I really care,
you needn't feel you must remind me
that we are…
just friends.
I am absolutely aware
that I
am not
your everything…



[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-20-1999).]

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-20 09:53 AM


Unrequited love...oh how sad  
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-12-20 11:14 AM


Ouch...been there too, K....it hurts!!....
< !signature-->

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  


[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 12-20-1999).]

Iloveit
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3 posted 1999-12-20 11:32 AM


well it doesn't hurt as much as it makes me mad....I never asked for more....am happy with what we have....just wanna kick him when he thinks I need reminding lolol....and you know somehow it helps...just to post the anger...am feeling a bit better....well that and that I sent it to him too *g*

thanks you two  

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
4 posted 1999-12-20 11:40 AM


Hey, hope you added one massive kick from me as well, enough to send him hopping for cover...stupid man!!!

Big HUSG

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
5 posted 1999-12-20 12:10 PM


Three cheers for sending it! *G*

You may have written it from anger... but it resonates with sadness... or maybe it's just that I can relate. *S* Well done!

Iloveit
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6 posted 1999-12-20 12:35 PM


lol@hopping for cover *grin* nope didn't send a kick from you.....but I can if you want lol

and suthern, I know...'bout the sadness thing, but....such is life....sigh...thanks

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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7 posted 1999-12-20 03:49 PM


This is not something that should happen to a person as nice as you are, lovey. He should accept your feelings and feel lucky.
JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
8 posted 1999-12-21 08:50 AM


He is the cutest thing in town ? ... huh, you mean bar me ?? ...  

Very well written ..  

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
9 posted 1999-12-21 09:19 AM


He is so very very cute
To sentiments it seems he's mute
I like how you jumped out the rut
And kicked his cute little butt
Liz

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
10 posted 1999-12-21 12:09 PM


Well,

He did say himself he needs his ass kicked upon occasion

suthern
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11 posted 1999-12-21 12:16 PM


Local Rebel: And he was right! LOL. WELCOME, feathered one!!!
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM
12 posted 1999-12-21 12:37 PM


Balladeer what a sweet thing to say...sometimes though it does a person good to get mad and stick up for ones self...hugs
JTF lolol as cute as you are....gonna have to give him first place....*g*
Elizabeth lol very cute poem thanks  
LR well gee, you didn't tell me I could do it in poetry form.....woulda kicked it for you long ago....lol....hugs and more hugs
suthern *big big smiles*

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).]

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
13 posted 1999-12-21 02:00 PM


In refrain I quote to him,
Undeserving son of sin,
How dare you ignore that which blooms
In Iloveit's pantaloons!

Sad to see such heartfelt emotion wasted on such heartless persons....  

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
14 posted 1999-12-21 02:18 PM


It's damn hard to ignore when she isn't wearing any....


Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
15 posted 1999-12-21 02:23 PM


ROFG@not wearing any.....ROFG.....shhhhhhh LR you two are going to have everyone wondering about my pantaloons ...   or lack thereof lolol

RS....thank you for the sentiment...but no...not heartless at all, he makes me feel alive....sigh...it does me good to get mad once in a while, shakes me out of my "I wish" world and into enjoying the smiles in reality....thanks ROFG@Iloveit's pantaloons  

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 12-21-1999).]

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
16 posted 1999-12-21 06:46 PM


Good job lloveit! This poem is unique! And that's how some people are for real.

 Nathan

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