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What I Wish Tonight
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What I Wish Tonight |
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Jordan Lake New Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 6 |
What I Wish Tonight... I wish to describe a scene... A scene where beauty gleams, I wish to converse with the likes of you, amongst the drops of morning dew, I wish to love, to hold, to ask of you... the questions of which you only knew. How does it feel to love so sweet? Does your heart pound, in measured beats, or does it skip with infinite leaps? I wish to know from within your heart, to gather knowledge and never part. What gift God has given me! To speak so clear and ever so free, to express what once was a jumbled mess, pouring forth an idiotic press, How can I fail in my honored quest? To love you, to hold you, to pass your gallant test? What words shall you give, to cherish this night? I give you my dreams, to hold with might, I hope to hear from you this night, to hear the bliss of a lovers light. This is what I wish tonight. Jordan Lake ©1999 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nicely done, Jordon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely wishes, Jordan!  Denise |
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amandafoose Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 11 |
very nice poem please look over my poem and reply to it even if its bad |
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