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Jordan Lake
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since 1999-12-20
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0 posted 1999-12-20 05:11 AM


What I Wish Tonight...

I wish to describe a scene...
A scene where beauty
gleams,
I wish to converse with the
likes of you, amongst the drops
of morning dew,
I wish to love, to hold,
to ask of you...
the questions of which you only
knew.
How does it feel to love so sweet?
Does your heart pound,
in measured beats, or does it skip
with infinite leaps?
I wish to know from within your
heart, to gather knowledge
and never part.

What gift God has given me!

To speak so clear and ever so free,
to express what
once was a jumbled mess, pouring
forth an idiotic press,
How can I fail in my honored quest? To
love you, to hold you, to pass
your gallant test?
What words shall you give, to
cherish this night? I give you
my dreams, to hold with might,
I hope to hear from you this
night, to hear the
bliss of a lovers light.
This is what I wish tonight.


Jordan Lake
©1999



 

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1 posted 1999-12-20 06:09 AM


Nicely done, Jordon.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-20 08:24 PM


Lovely wishes, Jordan!  

 Denise



amandafoose
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3 posted 1999-12-20 08:28 PM


very nice poem     please look over my poem and reply to it even if its bad
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