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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 1999-12-20 04:02 AM


Acrostically Yours

Perhaps the greatest thing I've learned
As far as Passions, is friendship earned
So many poets with talent rare
So many moments we all have shared
It's been my second home, indeed
Of love and comfort, thought and need
No other site has quite the grace
As this poets' secret posting place
Together we're a family
Exuding love in poetry

Perhaps the greatest thing I know
Of love is what the poems show
Every one must have a clue
The love I have for all of you

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand
1 posted 1999-12-20 04:05 AM


Ditto, ditto, Liz, the Passionate Poet!
Marge Tindal
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 1999-12-20 06:23 AM


See my friend
When you begin
Exquisite words
Emit from pen
Tantalizingly  

Poetry
Intrigues
Every
Creature
Elegantly

Offering
Forever

Words
Of
Real
Kudos

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-20 06:33 AM


What Sea and Marge said...  

And this: Keep doing those acrostics, my friend - you ARE succeeding.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-12-20 08:52 AM


Nicely done...we feel the same about you  
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 1999-12-20 09:32 AM


Love you too Liz......Such a heartfelt and sweet piece    

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
6 posted 1999-12-20 09:35 AM


Acrostics are hard to do, but you pulled it off beautifully..with such a nice topic! This is a grand place isn't it!  

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 1999-12-20 01:52 PM


Wonderful Elizabeth!!

Yes, DeVine. . these are hard to do. . . but the pay-off is worth it!!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
8 posted 1999-12-20 01:58 PM


Once again, you amaze me.
Thank you

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
9 posted 1999-12-20 02:02 PM


This definatly is really great work Liz, I agree...this is my second home as well, great job

Starboards

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

10 posted 1999-12-20 08:43 PM


You are amazing, Elizabeth! Always a pleasure to read what you have written!  

 Denise



Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
11 posted 1999-12-20 08:59 PM


Good was first
Rare talent shown
Each is better
As was known

To this end I must reply
Justin Kayce you cease to try
Other's will lament what's done
Because you paint with words as one

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 1999-12-20 09:27 PM


Thank you Passionate Poets for teaching me the ropes, and thank you all for your kind comments
Liz

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
13 posted 1999-12-20 10:19 PM


Today I began a few lines to toast this new found family of friends, but needn't finish as you've so elegantly done it.  
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