Open Poetry #4 |
High Ground |
Sunshine
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High Ground All around me there is some serious griping troubled souls in need of well-meant hyping, sometimes it can really get me down, that's when I head for the high ground. Some get a kick out of dishing despair, then act as if they never care; so the only way I can turn it around, is when I head for the high ground. I care not for gossip or righteous stories, for in such vain things there is no glory, and nay, I do not wear a crown, but simply step up, toward high ground. I could follow a simpler road, I could lie, and treat people cold, but all of that would bring me down, when I'd rather head for high ground. and I'd really rather not get stuck in useless misery and self-made luck, no, in someone's muck I'll not lie down, Lord, lift my feet toward high ground. Perhaps it's a road less traveled on, but my real friends know I'm never gone, for they're with me, standing all around, when we travel toward high ground. ©KRJ 19 December 1999 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Sunshine, No need to take the higher ground If you are in your friends' surround It's hard to judge another's intention Might be sorrow and not pretention Might be someone reaching out Might need your hand to sort things out I hope that you don't go too far For you are sure a shining star A lovely poet, a lovely friend Might be that person's happy end But then again, I cannot judge You might be trudging in real sludge! If that's the case,I am with you And heading for the hilltops, too! Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very poigniant piece Sunshine and there are times when I'll be standing right next to you on that higher ground.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Sunshine
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Elizabeth, friend to all sorts, a trip with you I'll not abort, my only reason to head for high ground is from those who would drag me down. I already know they could care less to put aside evil, live on stress, making lives miserable to those who'd hear, while I'd rather cast about cheer. So join me, friend, while we give of ourselves like jolly little friendly elves, and you will join me on my road as well as Passions' members in this abode. ** Pepper, you are the one with whom I'll meet as I gather strangers on the street to take them to you, who will cheer them on as we move to high ground, dusk or dawn. It's not that I'm better, I've far to go, it's just at this time in my life, it's so; I'd rather do good, and right, for I've seen the dark side and trust me, there is no sheen. As many here, leaders they are, all, and from good, sometimes I'd fall, but my life is in my hands, it's true, so I'll take the high ground, to be with you. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Wow! Sorry my poetic response mode is off this morning...LOL Y'all are GOOD! Sunshine, another great piece from your pen It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A good thought to remember when time are tough |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well damn it all save me a spot I won't be left here to rot. *L* Sy |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
That was beautiful, Sunshine. It takes that strength of commitment to elevate others, rather than being brought down into their darkness. We can all wallow in the depths of despair, crying on each others shoulders, but it takes one like you to make the sorrowful look up. |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Austrailians have a certain way To talk about a trip away They say, when they are full of doubt It's time to take a "walkabout". At times, in order not to grieve, It's best to pack one's bags and leave When ears are full of others' shouts It's time to take a walkabout. Some simple temporary jaunt To where harrassment doesn't haunt Where misery is not allowed And folks are kind and stand up proud. So, rather than endure the few Who fills one's life with ballyhoo, There is no need to frown and pout When you can simply walkabout. When things come on to bring us down It's time to smile and look around, Say, "Sorry, folks, I'm stepping out. It's time to take a walkabout". AMEN to your poem, Sunshine. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sunshine: Both heights give a different perspective and both are like fresh air.. HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Sunshine! Nothing like that higher ground, for sure! Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Let the Sunshine in....... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It shows once more what a beautiful person you are. : ) Merry Christmas to you Sunshine. Hugs. Munda : ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You Go Girl, don't let anyone bring you down!!! Loved it Sunshine What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Enjoyed the poem... and the responses!!! |
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Sunshine
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No one has enjoyed the responses more than I - and Balladeer, I am delighted beyond measure that you would take the time to compose such a delightful ditty. I am not unfamiliar with the term walkabout, but indeed did not know the true meaning behind the words. Thank you everyone, for letting me know your thoughts on this piece. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karilea, you are the Sun! Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I appreciate this even more now... glad I found the link for another read! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh this is due for a repost I believe |
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