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A Kiss ... A Sigh
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A Kiss ... A Sigh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Kiss ... A Sigh ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 A kiss, a sigh and then goodbye. My love, you're gone again. When will you return so the fire will burn? I'll be loving you until then. Return to me when the night has reclaimed the light of day. Love me again with the fervor you had, before you went away. Waiting and watching I will be ... on a kiss and a sigh return to me. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh.....Marge, why arn't you sleeping? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie - The magical muse finds it amusing to arouse me from my slumber. I did try counting sheep, but kept forgetting the number. So here I sit penning thoughts, I hope someone will keep. Hoping that a friend is also 'walking in my sleep'. *Just keeping you company, gal.  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah hon...I'll keep you company too. This is so sad  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, Top O' The Morning to you, Hoot. Didn't mean to make anyone sad. That little muse was running around like a romantic little fool just crying his little heart out. Kept begging me to pen his thoughts. Must be the rainy night in Florida ! I LOVE THE COMPANY OF FRIENDS ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sir Real Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 17 |
I really enjoyed this poem, what a wonderful person you must be. richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sir Real - Thank you so kindly for your comments. I like to think I am. Welcome to the land of 'Wide-Open Eyes'. Poetic muses running around your head too? Have a wonderful rest-of-the-day ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Your poem is so sweet, honest, but oh so sad as well. Just reading it made me feel warm inside and ready to dream sweet dreams of my loved one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sonny - Thanks for the comments. Don't feel saddened by this poem. Think of the joy of the return. Sweet dreams ! And welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Quest New Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 9 |
And a magical muse it must be. I'll have to put one of those on my Christmas wish list. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) I do know - I have just penned a poem at the nice time of 1.30am. My eyes are drooping, but my words are my breath and until they slow I cannot sleep! *smiles* Lovely poem as usual - ever write duds?! K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, If I had known you were going to be around , I woulds have stayed up, this woulsd have been worth staying up for, it's lovely! Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm sure glad that these posts don't disappear for those of us who aren't nocturnal...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quest- Ah, be careful what you wish for. My muse has a sister ! Severn - Little one ... I know what you mean. Thanks for liking. Elizabeth, my friend - One muse sleeps ... the other keeps vigil. Thank you lovely lady. Nan - Thank you. The noctural muses came to play. The muses write into the night. Sending a smile your way at break of day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
 Love it keep up the good work
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD - Thanks for dropping in for the read. Glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
My thanks to you and your midnight muse for this lovely piece Marge.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper - My pleasure. He will enjoy the praise. (He's quite a persistent little rascal) So glad it found you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So sadly touchingly beautiful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Denise. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You've brought the midnight oil to a boil. *L* Sy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - What a wonderful comment. Thank you, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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