Open Poetry #4 |
Heaven's Song |
Denise
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A babe for us was born of humble birth < !signature-->In stable crude He came in lowliness God's special gift for all the sons of earth His favor shown to man in graciousness. His coming told by prophets long ago So fervently they longed to see His day Messiah, Son of God, sent to bestow Salvation free to those in error's way. Hosannas to the King was heaven's song 'Neath Bethlehem's star-sprinkled velvet sky Still ages past angelic beings long To comprehend redemption from on high. Receive His gift, it came at quite a cost His life He paid to seek and save the lost. ------------------------------------------- For unto us a child is born, unto us a son is given And the government shall be upon His shoulders And He shall be called Wonderful Counselor, Mighty God, Everlasting Father, Prince of Peace. Isaiah 9:6 I wish you and yours a very blessed Christmas! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-17-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
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Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, This poem IS Christmas, and so beautiful I also wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas and hope some day to meet the two little angels you sent us Liz |
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Alwye
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Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful work..I too wish you and your family a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. *Krista Knutson* ~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~ |
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Nan
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King of Kings and Lord of Lords - And he shall reign forever and ever... Hallelujah!! |
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Balladeer
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Merry Christmas, Denise. Thank you for your wonderful presence. |
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Denise
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Thank you, Elizabeth, Krista, Nan and Balladeer for reading and for your kind comments! You all are just the best! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
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Denise I am in awe! This was beautiful and so fitting! Thank you for this! Merry Christmas |
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Elizabeth
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Beautiful work as always, my friend, and Merry Christmas! Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
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Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Heavenly |
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Denise
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Thank you, Rebecca, Elizabeth, and Ruth. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
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Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem Whitedove! Have a Merry Christmas and have a happy new year. |
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Denise
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Thank you Nate, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Merry Christmas to you too! (I'm not WhtDove, though, as lovely a compliment as that is! I am Denise!) Denise |
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Seaangel Member
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Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Beautiful poem, Denise. I am not religious but do appreciate the skill of this. |
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Master Senior Member
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Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Agree with Ruth, Heavenly! I love the last two lines! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
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really, really nice Denise. This is the kind of poem that should adorn a card, you know... K |
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Denise
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Seaangel, Master and Severn, thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments! Denise |
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Martie
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The beauty you have with words that speak your faith are heavenly--Merry Christmas! |
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Denise
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Thank you, Martie! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
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Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is beautiful Denise ! I loved it. Nobody noticed yet it was a sonnet ? LOL I seem to have a "thing" for sonnets lately. ; ) Merry Christmas to you Denise ! Hugs. Munda : ) |
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First__Knight Senior Member
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I have been away for a few days....and I almost missed this work of art of yours. This is truely wonderful and I am glad I found it Thank you Denise Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
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Denise, this is most beautiful!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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mc Member
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Posts 67México |
LOVELY Denise, Merry Christmas to you!!! mcestrada |
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samsonheart Member
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Posts 72Missouri rez. |
I loved your poem. Very well written. And by His stripes we are healed. samsonheart |
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Denise
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Thanks Munda, me too! Seems I'm hooked on them now! Thank you so much, First Knight! I'm glad you liked it! Dark Angel, thank you also! I'm so glad you thought it was beautiful! mc, thank you too for reading and commenting! Samsonheart, thanks so much and AMEN! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
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Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Denise This is what Christmas is really about! JESUS!!!!! Merry Christmas! It's great to see your photo! It is nice! |
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Denise
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Thank you Romantic Heart. I'm so happy that you liked it. Yes, He is what it is all about! Denise |
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Michael
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Wonderful poem, Denise, I truly love this piece. Michael |
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Denise
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Thanks so much, Michael, I'm glad! Denise |
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Rod Member
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Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
Denise - you have enriched my Christmas so much by posting this. It is heartwarming to see such a strong Christian presence here on Passions - and even more so to see such work supported and admired by secular poets. Peaceful co-existence is a wonderful thing to behold! A lovely poem! Very well done. And a very Happy Christmas to you also! Rod |
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Denise
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Thank you so much, Rod for your read and kind comments! I am glad to have enriched your Christmas. I agree, this is a wonderful place. Truly blessed I am to have found it! Denise |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
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Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
It may not be Christmas but that does not mean that we can not appreciate what Jesus has done for us. |
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