Open Poetry #4 |
She calls to me |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
She calls to me Omnipresence in mornings mist. Plays like notes of a flautist. Permeating all that stir, Like frankincense and myrrh. Painting my mind with willows brush, Stroking my heart with recall touch. Wafting me in a phantoms flair, Embracing me in fragrant air. Dancing under my eye lids, Shadows on a blood red grid. Irradiating moon light streams, Coloring through a torrid dream. Her movements a mesmeric dance I watch it, transfixed in trance. And wonder at this visions goal, Burning in my aching soul. Does she call me in genteel? In the softness of conceal? This I plead, in my persist. Till the sun dries up the mist. Do I wait, another phase, Till I meet her in the haze? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
He Calls To Me He calls to me in haunting words Revealed in rhythmic poetry And in the stars so late at night Placed on display for me to see He calls to me in open skies Where clouds are laced in fields of blue And from the depths of misty dreams Where once again we are us two He calls to me in music notes In the depth of treble cleft And even now I hear his voice Calling like he never left Oh, he calls to me, and I call too The only difference being In my longing, I picture him In his, it's her he's seeing Inspirational Seymore |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, The poet paints with willows brush. And the readers sit in silent hush Consuming the beauty of his words Of heartfelt songs til now unheard A lovely poem upon the screen To many eyes remains unseen So hopfully this poet will look At the prospects of a published book With autographed copies to all the Passionate Poets! Love ya, Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
good, good, good, good, good... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Seymour! Did I ever tell you that you have a way with words that I like very much?! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sy - some conflict going on here. Fantastically written and I will be fighting to get in the line for an autographed copy. Actually I probably won't - you'll have to mail me one!!! Ruth - your poem was lovely. K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Your poem has touched me tender. So full of words of splendor. You have a talent I admire, That any male would inpire. *L* Sy Elizabeth, Your loving words and clever wit, Has thrown my wife into a fit. For she too nags me into look The possibility of a book. But I for one fail to see, The amateur that I be. In the sea of professionals With poetry two-dimensional. I love you for your sweet medallion. It's praise enough for this old stallion. *L* Sy Denise the sweet, I love the pleasure of your read, If I were a Knight I'd grant you a deed. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Amateur you claim to be But that is not what others see Someone said you write like Frost And I say your poems should not be lost They should be published, that's for sure You've got Frost's talent, even more I'm sure that many will agree The beauty of your poetry Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, It's in back of my thoughts not hard to find And the older I get the more in mind. Thank you. *L* Sy |
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andy Junior Member
since 1999-12-16
Posts 17 |
Sniff...sob...Sy ignored me! Well then...I'm just going to...to...to cry! ( ) Well just noticed this is under andy - our newest recruit fromthe household of Sea and Severn - but I think you can guess who really wrote this Sy!!!! LOL [This message has been edited by andy (edited 12-16-1999).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - With each new poem you write I read and think ... such lovely thoughts put to paper. Indeed, if a book of your poetry were on a shelf at Barnes and Noble ... I'd pick up a copy. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andy Please do not cry For you mean more to me, Then all the porpoise in the sea. Marge, Thank you so much, if I ever do I'll give you a copy. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, so many words of praise you gain whenever the muse has used your name you must know this lady here sits in awe of you, my dear. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
See Sy, Words like that coming from a poet such as Martie, should ring well in your ear. I have been telling you this for a long time.You underestimate your talents, being the SHY person that you are. Love ya, Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you so much for the coments Since I am so shy they mean much to me. Liz, Perhaps I do but I wouldn't believe anyone but you *L* Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've always time for a sigh for Sy...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Why thank you Nan and I sigh for you. *L* |
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