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Her Voice
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Her Voice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Like the sound of an angel of the highest order Her voice speaks to me in my dreams From beyond the night, crossing that border Where once there were only screams. She speaks of a love not yet known A love that she and I will share But until that day where she will be my own This distance is more than I can bear. Oh angel of my heart speak to me again Calm my heart and quench my fears Your voice says that you will come. . . when? For all I can see now are tears. "I will come to you soon my love, so dry your eyes. We will be together, soon we will be one Our hearts are bound together, our love is the tie And on that day, I will not leave you when comes the rising sun." That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sven, How do you do it? It's so difficult for me to write a verse with 4 rhyming phrases and you did it htroughout the poem. Perhaps all of your poems are such, but I never noticed because I was more interested in the content. Your lady friend will like this one, It is very romantic. Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very nice indeed, love the last line particularly. [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-14-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aah my friend, you did it again!!  So beautiful *sigh*  What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven - This is really very pretty. Nice job, indeed ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all so much. . . Elizabeth, I really don't know how I get the lines to rhyme, it just comes to me. . . Thank you Isis. . . Severn and Marge, glad that you enjoyed it. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
This is so beautiful. Believe me, she will adore your words. |
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