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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 1999-12-14 08:39 AM


Sit down, I am here.
I have been here always.
I have watched Hitler and Stalin
And their downfalls begin.
I have watched leaders
Come and go.

Who am I?
You don't know?
Then let me show you.

I remember the Civil War, the Vietnam War,
The Persian Gulf and many more.
I watched the battles from day to day.

Wars have come and men have gone.
Leaders have lead and are no more.
But I am here, here at your door.
I will stay as you move on.
I will stay when you are gone.
For I am History, I am Time.



© Copyright 1999 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-12-14 10:22 AM


Eloise,
If only history could really speak, we would be alarmed at the truth, but even so, we should study it and remember from it.
This is a beautiful poem
Liz

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 1999-12-14 02:51 PM


...and if only mankind would find a way to learn from it...
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-14 04:22 PM


And time is so impassive - nice writing, E.

K

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 1999-12-14 04:48 PM


Time, the eternal witness. . . well done. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-15 12:00 PM


Well done, Eloise!  I liked this!

 Denise



UNLOVED-1
Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 16
dominican republic
6 posted 1999-12-15 12:09 PM


wow i really liked your poem. i can see you have been through a lot but you're still here and while you're here keep writing poems cause this was a great one.

 otis omar

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-12-15 01:03 PM


Great piece Eloise!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



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