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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-13 04:09 AM


Color My World
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Bring your Crayons,
my world is waiting for your touch.
Color my world with love,
I'm needing your artistry so much.

Brighten my world with colors
applied so expertly by you.
Color outside the lines,
as you are prone to do.

Color my world with hope,
with desire and with dreams.
Color my world today,
I'm ready for
a new color scheme.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Rod
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1 posted 1999-12-13 04:20 AM


You have sure brightened my day with that one! Very colourful! Well done!
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-12-13 04:27 AM


Thank you. So glad you enjoyed.
I like the very idea of day-brighteners !
Have a wonderful one.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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3 posted 1999-12-13 04:30 AM


Oh my Marge....as alway you color my life with your words..   

PS Almost forgot....No more blue please...LOL

 Share what you are for you are what you share


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-12-13 04:35 AM


Thank you, First_Knight.
I'm almost never blue.
Sometimes I may write blue ...
but it's usually for someone else to
find what they need in it's words.
Have a great day !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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5 posted 1999-12-13 04:37 AM


Marge this is wonderful, thank you .  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-12-13 04:45 AM


DarkAngel - My pleasure !
And thanks for finding it 'wonderful'.

~*Marge*~< !signature-->

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com       





[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-13-1999).]

Severn
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7 posted 1999-12-13 05:53 AM


Marge(y), you need only a pen to colour our hearts with your words. Don't stop writing OK?! Passions just wouldn't be the same...

K

Nan
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8 posted 1999-12-13 07:58 AM


On my way.... and I'm bringing that great big ole box - the one with all the rows of different shade of each color.... and I expect some banana bread for a treat too...
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-12-13 09:36 AM


Marge dear, you need no more color in your world, it is so bountiful it overflows onto each of us each time you bestow your beautiful words upon us. You are a virtual rainbow my friend  
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10 posted 1999-12-13 02:43 PM


I enjoyed this a ton, it colored my world as I read it. Thanks  )
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 1999-12-13 02:49 PM


Love your spirit, Marge
It's so colorful!
Liz

Willem
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12 posted 1999-12-13 05:35 PM


Just want to add my voice to all those that
are singing your praise.  Your poems have
been such a positive inspiration to all of
us. Thank you, Marge, and stay with us.

Willem

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13 posted 1999-12-13 08:51 PM


Severn -
Hey gal.  Don't you EVER sleep?
Thank you for the very, very nice thoughts.

Nan -
LOL !  BaNANa Bread in the oven.
COME ON DOWN !
Thanks.

Hoot -
Awwww !  You make me feel so good.
Thanks gal.

TheRaaven -
Thanks ... see what a little box of Crayons can do !  
I love to color !

Elizabeth, my friend -
Ah, the color of love for all,
'tis all it is.  

Willem -
You guys are all gonna make me cry ...
and that's not my 'box of colors'.
Cut it out !
Thanks, Willem.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Severn
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14 posted 1999-12-13 09:48 PM


LOL - not much at the moment my friend...


WhtDove
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15 posted 1999-12-13 09:55 PM


Very colorful Marge! You can color my world too!!!  

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season


Denise
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16 posted 1999-12-13 11:52 PM


Lovely colors, Marge!

 Denise



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