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The Pen of a Poet
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The Pen of a Poet |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The light has dimmed tonight a poet laid down her pen she wrote from a loving heart but vows never to do so again What light she had shone here unseen by many of you a poet's pen lain to rest rending her heart in two. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad. Is this a true story? What happened? Let me know please? Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Not a true story, though the feelings are true....  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Devine I always see the light you shine here and will always continue to do so my friend! I'm sorry your hurt! Don't you ever lay down that pen! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, I'm so sorry you're blue  Please let me know what to do To bring back the joy again To bring back that poet's pen! How about some of those rolly smilies?  Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
PdV....if you lay down your pen, well.....I'm not threatening you or anything......ok....so maybe I am. LOL I have learned so much from you in here - sounds like someone has hurt you - disregard their carelessness, and keep a clear head, ok? I can relate to your frustration though...I think maybe I've been there - felt that. You sure said alot with few words! Bravissimo my lady ! - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
~Grabs her psychology books~ ~trying to figure out Ms. deVine~ hmmmmmmmmmmm This could be a fairly difficult task, darlin'! But, I must admit...it would be well worth the effort if I could help you in any way.  Now, if someone say...took words that you wrote from your heart and somehow used them against you, or twisted them around...I could see why you'd want that part of you to be "put to rest." (so to speak) Just remember one thing, the words you write are not merely for the masses. They are for YOU. I believe that about all art forms. (btw..if this has nothing to do with what you've written, I hope it at the very least brought a smile.) ~climbs carefully off the platform~ ~takes off her Freudian glasses and bids you goodnight~  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your light has been been one of the brightest here, PdV! So sad, so blue. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I am sorry your sad.....I liked your poem here. It show great sorrow and you have such talent. I fear a great loss should you stop writing. Tell us it won't be so Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
poet devine we lush you! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Lady deVine, I pray you do not give up the pen nor keyboard. Losing such a talent as yours to mundane life would be tantamount to sin and while a sinner I may be, still that is one sin that would weigh heavily on me. You may call it enlightened self-interest if you wish then that I ask that you give over such thoughts and deeds. I ask not solely as a friend and fellow wordsmith, but as a reader of your works and for the best interests of Passions. Thank you for being you. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PDV, I feel terrible that you are hurting and Im sorry that I did not see it.Please if you need a shoulder mine is available. I have learnt so much from you, please don't give up your pen. I would certainly miss reading your work. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*HUG* Here's a little light for you ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: What's up sweetheart? HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All righty, my friend.... Time for tea..... and a chat... all will be well.. BTW - everyone gets to put down their pen occasionally - you do even that with style |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
PDV...you know I can relate well to this one. It is hard to write with a sad heart. But you have so much warmth and vitality to waste that by not pouring it out in your clever words would truly be a shame. I know, I wasted 15 years where I didn't write a word and I regret every wasted moment of that time. Meet me on ICQ if you need to talk, just don't give up your words. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Let that pen rest only long enough to flex your fingers, deVine one... for we need your illumination! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Poet deVine, One arrow, one bow. One sorrow, one beau. One part, one woe. One heart I know. She should not leave, She should not grieve, She's not naive, And after all she's Gods made Eve. Your friend, Sy [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 12-13-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I echo all above and send Hugs PdV.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a powerful little piece, PdV. I'm glad it's not true. Michael |
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