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Open Poetry #4

Fair Rose- A Sonnet

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

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0 posted 1999-12-12 06:19 PM

Fair Rose, thy bloom from tender stem hath sprung,
As Luna's glow, upon night sky doth shine,
Of thy blossom, the god's themselves have sung,
Love's madrigals, will ever thee be mine?
From forth thy lips, thee sing sweet harmonies,
With soft caress, that kiss upon mine ear,
And touch within my soul; love's symphonies,
Forevermore, thy beauty will I hear.
Thou art the night, the calm proceeding dawn,
The glow of welkin stars through rising mist,
When air is crystalline; as newborn fawn,
Thy tenderness, when I by goddess kissed.
With rising sun, night fades with morning light,
I wait again, my goddess of the night.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-12-1999).]

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-12 06:20 PM

Beautiful sonnet!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 1999-12-12 06:29 PM

Really lovely, Mike.
I like this very much.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-12-12 09:09 PM

Lovely sonnet Mike @-----)---)-----

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

4 posted 1999-12-12 09:12 PM

I enjoy this form, Mike, and you write it so well.

Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

5 posted 1999-12-12 09:17 PM

Excellent sonnet Mike. This was very beautiful. I especially liked the last two lines.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-12-12 09:26 PM

Mike,
Enjoyed the read. Well done.

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

7 posted 1999-12-12 10:53 PM

Thank you all for the gracious comments...
they are appreciated.

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